Tuesday, August 17, 2021

persuasive writing.

In writing last week we wrot about whether we would rather fly or be invisibel.
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7 comments:

  1. Mrs RussellAugust 18, 2021 at 12:35 PM

    Hi Bailey, thank you for sharing your persuasive writing. I think I would like to be invisible. Which one do you think you would like to be?
    - Mrs Russell

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  2. AnonymousAugust 19, 2021 at 11:56 AM

    Hi Bailey. You have some really neat ideas about being able to fly rather than invisible. I like the 'flying away from school' one the best. Where else would you go if u could fly? I think the bright colours make your work really stand out! Maybe next time you could introduce your persuasive writing with a question or statement. I can see you take a lot of pride in your work. Keep it up!!

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  3. AnonymousAugust 19, 2021 at 12:14 PM

    Hi Bailey. I love the colourful background you used on your work. It really stands out. I think flying would be great too. I like the 'flying away from school' idea the best. Perhaps next time you could add an introduction to your persuasive writing. I can see you take a lot of pride in your work. Where else would you like to fly to? Keep up the good work Alyssa. Great job.

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  4. AnonymousAugust 19, 2021 at 12:40 PM

    Hi Bailey. I really like the the colourful background you used. It makes your work stand out. You have some really neat ideas about why it would be good to fly instead of being invisible. The 'flying away from school' one was my favourite. Where else would you fly to? Next time maybe you could add an introduction to your persuasive writing. I can see you take a lot of pride in your work. Keep it up Alyssa. Great job.

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  5. Mrs HansenAugust 22, 2021 at 7:44 PM

    Hi Bailey, I agree it would be great to fly. I would choose that too. Great work - Mrs Hansen

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  6. UnknownAugust 30, 2021 at 11:25 AM

    well done baily your hard work is great

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  7. UnknownAugust 30, 2021 at 11:26 AM

    well done

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